Tuesday, May 18, 2021

The Sunshine Blogger Award Tag

 

Greetings.

I have been tagged with the Sunshine Blogger blog tag, tagged as "blog tags", as you can see below this post in my blog's tags. Thank you kindly, Ariel, for passing it my way once more. I award you the award for awarding people with awards.


Tag Rules:

~ Thank the blogger who nominated you and link back to their blog. 

~ Answer all the eleven questions sent by the person who nominated you. 

~ Nominate eleven new blogs to receive the award and write them eleven new questions. 

~ List the rules and display the Sunshine Blogger Award logo in your blog post. (I cannot be bothered for the latter presently. I will hopefully update this post some day and add the graphic.)


Questions from Ariel


What's your favorite song at the moment? Why do you like it?

It would likely be shanty "The Wellerman Come," as I've listened to many a cover of it and find myself singing it constantly. 

As for why do I like it, I'm always fond of a ballad. Songs to covey emotion are great, but songs that tell a story are my favorite. And this one always has a strong and free attitude to its sound which pairs with its story very nicely. 


Favorite book at the moment?

I don't know what I would've answered literal moments ago, but having just peeked at my older posts I found my one regarding The Last Dragon/The Last Elf by Silvana de Mari. And once again, my adoration and affection has been claimed by that darling book. 

It is perhaps my all-time favorite book. There's so much to love about it, and I miss reading it dearly (for I have lost my copy). 


If you were sucked into the world of your current WIP, what would you do? How would you make a living? Which characters would you get to know?

Ah, Ariel's slipping in world building into a tag, isn't she? XD 

If I were sucked into the world of "Roslyn," I would probably find my hope sinking faster than an anvil in water. Assuming, that is, that I would be sucked into the world as it is during my WIP and not before or after. Aside from that, the only other thing I think I would do is [spoiler] and stalk my characters as they go on their adventure.

To make a living, I would have to heavily rely on my knowledge of this world and the people within it to coax my way into odd jobs here and there. That wouldn't work often, but it would so that I could survive. Possible. Likely not. But there's a chance. 

For what characters I would get to know, probably my antagonist. He's a curious fellow, and strangely he and I are in agreement on some things. It would be very interesting to interact with him and see him actually doing the things that he does. 


What book is top on your TBR right now and why?

I have many fighting for that place at present, and unfortunately none of them are the ones I own. 

The Dragon Within by Melody Jackson and Mirage by Miranda Marie hold sentimental priority, as those authors are two of my favorites and those books mentioned are the only books of either that I haven't read yet. 

Sing To Me Of Rain by E.B. Dawson holds the top of my TBR for anticipated releases because it sounds and looks like an amazing book. 

The Inheritance Cycle by Christopher Paolini is top for books that I already own because it's huge and seeing the giant stack of books sitting on top of my desk every night as I fall asleep, knowing they are unread, is intimidating. I am currently reading Eragon and not making great progress, but it is my hope that as the books progress, I get more engrossed with them. 


What subjects are you fascinated with these days? What's the latest fun fact you've learned on that topic?

I've been looking at sword stuff (though that's not really anything new) and author stuff, and learned that a sword Brandon Sanderson uses in one of his books is inaccurately made as a long sword, and more important that Sanderson new it was inaccurate but that his agent or editor (I forget which) made him change it because apparently using words that readers know is more important than being accurate.


If you could go to any three places in the world, where would you go and in what order? What activities would be on your "must-do" list?

Assuming I get to stay for a while, Ireland is priority. There I would volunteer to work at Mossy Bottom for a time, expose the countryside, and though I'm not at all a fan of alcohol, I'd have to spend some time in a pub (it's Ireland, after all). Not drinking, but sitting in a dark corner and observing everything like I'm Aragorn in the Prancing Pony, until the loud noises scare me away. 

Next would be Egypt, but not just anywhere in Egypt. You said "anywhere in the world," so I'm going in and under the Sphinx, exploring the covered place before its paws and slipping under the holes along its sides, and getting to see inside the figure itself without breaking that seal on its head. I want to know what's in it, and by use of this strange magic that is letting me go anywhere, I will just poof inside and poof back out once I'm done. 

Now for the last one I'm torn between Peru and Mexico for other archaeological reasons, and will thus instead choose neither because I can't decide. So instead I choose the underwater forest of somewhere. I don't know where it is, but it's beautiful and I want to see it by myself (with the proper equipment, lest I drown). 


If you could do anything with your hair for a day and have it go back to normal the next day, what would you do?

Well I'd have it turn into a fish and walk about freaking people out, of course. Or perhaps I'd turn it to water, still connected to my head of course, that stays in one form and floats around and all. That would be cool. Oh oh oh, it would also be cool to have all of my hair replaces with flowers, styled in a bob with the buds and blossoms all facing outwards. 

However, if you want me to choose something possible, I would make my hair as long as Rapunzel's and braid it up like hers and see if, by use of many braids and tugging and tightening, I can make it the same length she had it when she'd gotten it braided. 

Once that experiment was done, I suppose I'd just cut it all off and donate it, assuming that the hair on my head goes back to normal the next day, and the seventy-something feet of hair that I've cut off will not cease to exist. 


What's your favorite tea? (Or coffee, if you're a weirdo who likes that bitter bean water.) 

Oh dear, are you trying to offend the Americans and Ethiopians? Tsk tsk. 

But to answer your question, it depends entierly on the type of tea. 

For black, Twinning's Irish Breakfast is my favorite. 

For white, passionfruit is my favorite.

For herbal, peppermint. 

For fruit, lemon ginger or peace ginger. Apple cinnamon is also could, but I must use heaps of sugar for that one so I usually reserve it for special fall nights. 


If you were to grow one type of plant, what plant would you choose?

Oh, I do not like this question. There are very many good and important plants. Hm. To answer this, allow me to tell you a story which took place three years back. 

I was crammed in a vehicle with several peers as we were traveling. These peers were not people that I particularly liked or disliked. They were just other humans. 

One way or the author, someone was talking about aloe vera. It may have even been me. Then a lad kept asking questions about aloe vera, such as "can you eat aloe vera?" "can you drink aloe vera?" "can you swim in aloe vera?"

To which I, having knowledge of the plant, replied "yes but it's not going to do much good for you," "technically, you could, if you scrape out the goop," and "I do not know. I suppose you might be able to with enough goop and liquid from the plants." 

Then he and another boy began discussing ways of using aloe vera to end world hunger. Some scheme involving dropping cats strapped with the plants off an airplane (using grocery sacks of parachutes) over  Africa so that the cats would (I am assuming, this was not specified) deliver the plants to starving people once they landed. 


When you keep that all in mind, these lads raised some fair possibilities. Given that you can eat aloe vera, that it has medicinal purposes, that (being a plant) it retains liquid, and that it is a hearty plant which produces more plants rather quickly depending on how you care for it, I cannot think of a plant that would be better to have for practicality. 


Your thoughts on dancing?

It is a quaint activity, especially when done in ballrooms and when taking the form of a group dance, it is a wonderful way to bring a community of people together to have good fun which isn't related to any of the great offendable subjects, and it is well for encouraging affection, even if one's partner is barely tolerable. 

In other forms, such as ballet and various styles and performance types, it is an art and fun thing which I admire and would quite like to do, but alas, cannot. 


What's your favorite Summer activity?

Reading outside during sunset. Sitting in a tree. Reading while sitting in the tree during sunet. Complaining about the humidity. Gardening.  Camping and hiking are wonderful as well, but those I'd prefer to do in Spring and Fall. 

Oh, I also enjoy inflating the giant llama unicorn that sprays water and that is affectionately named "Gandalf" so that I may watch my nieces (and my nephew, once he is old enough) play in it. And perhaps play in it a little myself.  

Mostly, anything that I can do while sitting on my porch as the sunsets is a good activity.



Eleven new questions for those who I have tagged: 


~ What is an unpopular bookish opinion of yours?

~ How do you feel about receiving and sending hand written letters? 

~ If you could swap places with anyone in the book community (reviewers, bloggers, writers, authors, etc.) for a day who would it be with and why?

~ What is your most anticipated book release of this year?

~ If you could bring back any trend from the past and implement it in our culture for the present to the foreseeable future, what trend would it be? 

~ You have to pick one of your least favorite songs to play at your funeral. What song do you pick?

~ What blog have you been following the longest? 

~ Name a indie song, book, and/or movie that you enjoyed. 

~ Would you eat a live worm if it meant you would get an endless supply of gummy worms afterwards? 

~ What is one thing someone has dong "For The Aesthetic" that you was incredibly ridiculous? 

~ How do you organize your books? ("I don't" is a perfectly fine answer.)


Nominees:

Mary from Wild Writing Dreams 

Miranda from Virtual Paper

Julia from Julia's Creative Corner 

Julia from LitAflame 

Anyone who cares to participate 

((Yeah I'm not tagging all eleven people. And I'm not actually going to tell these people that I'm tagging them, either. Not because I'm lazy (though I am) but because bloggers get swamped with tags fairly often. If you are one of the bloggers that I tagged and you just so happened to see this post, congrats, you've been tagged!)) 




 Well, that's the end of it the tag. Now that that's done, have you ever noticed that the tags always refer to the tag-ees as nominees? And the tag is called an award? So you're nominated someone for an award, but how do you actually win the award? There's been thousands upon thousands of people "nominated", and some of us have been nominated several times, so do we stand a better chance than others of winning the actual award? What is the actual award? When will we know if we've won it? 

I imagine that at the end of the world, when all has turned dystopian and smoke randomly emits from the earth for aesthetic, everyone wears gas masks, modern electricity as we know it has ended and been destroyed yet we still have some technological advances, a voice will randomly say over a loudspeaker (there is a world-wide intercom system, you see) the name of the winner of the Sunshine, Liebster, and other such awards. Then the voice, distorted and monotone will say "your prize will be delivered to you within forty-eight hours."

The winner will wait in suspense. All gas-mask covered faces, all lifeless eyes, will turn to them. The world will hold its breath to see what the long-forgotten nominations they'd received throughout their internet life could have won them. Jealousy and curiosity will mingle, but no one will attempt to pry the award from this fortunate soul, whatever it may be. No, they have to much respect for the years and years of unknown anticipation. The great and terrible prize - whatever it may be - will be the victor's alone. 

An hour passes. Ten. Twenty. Forty-seven. 

The vvm-vvm-vvm-vm of a spinning helicopter - a rusted and ruined device barely managing to stay in the air - can be heard over the ignorant simplicity of radioactive birds' song. The helicopter comes to hover over the victor. A rope ladder - oh prehistoric wonders that remain even so far into the future - is dropped, uncoiling itself, reaching out to the victor. 

The victor tentatively closes their hand around it. They climb up a few of the twisting rungs. The ladder is lifted into the helicopter as unseen hands pull it in. All people watch, their necks craned upwards as the victor disappears inside. 

The flying vehicle sputters. It drops a bit. it lifts more. Then it turns, heading a distance off, higher and higher while all watch. And then? Then, my dear losing nominee, the helicopter self destructs, and we unfortunate losers of this award are left in the misery that is the future while the victor finally gets to rest. 


Or something like that. Who knows. 

Anyways. I hope you enjoyed the post despite the fact that I haven't bothered to edit it. Have a great day. Remember to come back on July 1st for a fantasy trilogy giveaway. 


    Regards,

                        - E.P.



Saturday, May 15, 2021

Giveaway Update: TFRC winners and July 1st

 

Greetings! 

This past April I announced I was hosting a giveaway for The Fire Rain Chronicles. *Today, I officially conclude that giveaway and congratulate Sophia and Libby on winning their prizes! There was a bit of confusion when purchasing the copies, so they may arrive to your mailbox/inbox a bit later than expected, but they are coming! I'm very sorry for the inconvenience, and I hope you two enjoy the books when they find their way to you.

*I wrote this on the twelfth but didn't finish it so I didn't post it. So technically, it was already concluded, but I am officially concluding it now.

You may have noticed that we had only two winners when I said there would be three prizes. This is because only two people entered this giveaway. I'm learning it is a difficult thing to promote giveaways, and so for the giveaways to come (after the July 1st one) I'm going to change my method of promoting them. In addition to that, though, I ask that you readers help spread the word when giveaways are being hosted here, as that will bring in more attention, and more attention is more support towards the indie author we're hosting. 

But in the mean time I have one extra prize, the copy of Azalei's Riders. With this one, I intend to reach out to a reviewer with an established audience and offer them it for free in exchange for a review. 


The coming giveaway in July will be of a very similar nature to this one as it's too late for me to make any big promotional plans this time around, but hopefully it will get more attention anyways. Please remember to spread the word about it and the indie authors page to writers and readers alike.

Thank you for much for reading this. I hope you'll come back on July 1st for the Dragons' Bane trilogy five year anniversary giveaway. 


Wishing you a good day, 


            - EP 


Saturday, April 24, 2021

The Fire Rain Chronicles Five-Year Anniversary {USA GIVEAWAY}

 



Hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hi hiiiii! 

Remember how I said something big was going to happen one July 1st in my anniversary post? Well that's still going to happen (see the end of the post for details) but it turns out another big thing is going to happen today! And that is because TODAY, this most fabulous *April 24th, 2021, marks The Fire Rain Chronicles' (Azalei's Riders, Azalei's Strategy, and Azalei's Fall in that order), FIVE year anniversary! 

I am a big fan of Miranda Marie (the author of TFRC as well as the books Echoes and Mirage). And so to thank that wonderful woman for writing these wonderful books, here's Bleeding Ink's very first giveaway!  

I have decided to be a nice host and not make you read through this whole post before entering (because I know some people see "giveaway" and enter without really caring if they actually want the product or not), so first off here's the giveaway:


-Giveaway Information-


The prizes:

There will be three winners, and thus three prizes!


3rd place: A kindle copy of Azalei's Riders

2nd place: A kindle copy of Azalei's Riders as well as Azalei's Strategy 

1st place: The completed TFRC trilogy! Azalei's Riders, Azalei's Strategy, and Azalei's Fall with your choice of paperback or kindle copies! 

(The giveaway will be limited to the USA, I'm afraid. Hopefully in the future I will be able to offer giveaways that extent to all countries, as non-Americans should get to read these books, too!) 


How to enter:

All I need you to do to enter this giveaway isssss....

-Share this post (save it to a Pinterest board, send the link to a friend, post it on social media, post of of the graphics (at the end of the post) on social media, etc.)

-Email me (at edna.pellen@gmail.com) to confirm your entry by providing visual evidence that you shared the post (screenshots, links to your posts, those such things) as well as telling me your first name.

-Comment on this post (about anything! Seriously you can even just say "boop beep". No profane or inappropriate comments, though, that's the exception.)


How winners will be chosen:

Once you've entered (again, by commenting and by emailing me), I'll draw names at random and we'll see who wins! I will then personally email the three winners and provide them with their digital copies, and/or ask for their place of residence if the first place winner chooses paperback copies.  


The Deadline:

The deadline for this giveaway will be May 11th (chosen because May 11th is the date that the books were republished on), so if you want to participate, make sure you enter by then! 

By May 12th, I will email the winners to let them know that they won. 


If you win:

I don't require anything, but it would really help the authors out if you left a review on as many review sites as possible (just one is okay too ;D) and told some friends about it. 

Also, if it turns out that you really like the books once you've read them, you should come back here and tell me about it! It would also be really sweet if you reached out to Miranda Marie and told her that you liked them, because it's always wonderful to be told that someone enjoyed something you made and indie authors don't get a lot of that.



-Information about the Books-

Alright, you've read the giveaway part, now here's the information on the actual books.


Overview: 

The Fire Rain Chronicles is a YA sci-fi dystopian trilogy that is independently published. Taking place in the early 3000s, it explores many interesting and sometimes difficult topics in a new light.

These books are filled to the rim with great and convicting characters, intense sequences, good worldbilding, good prose, and engaging narration, all while remaining clean content-wise (though there is violence) without breaking the realism. 



Book Description:

I am listing all three books' descriptions, but I personally would skip reading the last two if you've not already read the book that comes before them, because the descriptions kind of give a few things away. Not fully to spoiler point, but it's better safe than sorry.


Azalei's Riders:

It's the early 3000s and for the Southern Countries, there has never been a better time to live in. Technological advances have made the need for roads obsolete and drastically reduced the amount of earth needed to grow crops. As a result, much of the planet has been plunged back into the breathtaking, unknown wilderness it once was; a fact that has, for centuries, been celebrated. 

Until now. 

With the disappearances - thousands vanishing out of the sky every time a transport leaves on of the cities - it is soon becoming clear that the jungle that now separates the islands of civilization is harboring an enemy. Someone is here, I their forests, on their land, hiding somewhere in the vast, impenetrable space. Someone they can't see or detect. Someone who is making the cities go dark, on by one.

How do you fight an enemy who slips passed your radars, is undetected by your satellites, and concealed from your scouts?

Turn the tables. Develop your own secret weapon. One just as invisible to them as they are to you. 

Only this weapon isn't made of gears and wires. It's not moving pieces and a quick plug in to recharge. This one doesn't have a control panel, a comfortable seat, an air conditioned cockpit.

This weapon breathes.



Azlaei's Strategy:

Sometimes lines get blurred.

Sometimes the truth is a lie, and the lies are the truth. 

Sometimes what you believed was rain is really fire.

Sometimes your saving grace is the destruction you've been fearing. 


Azalei's enemy isn't the kind that subjects his people through fear and threats. He's a more dangerous kind of enemy - the kind that weaves hope and safety into chains. The kind that inspires, enthralls, and enraptures. He has always known that fear loses to hope in the end, and so he became the hope.

That leaves Azalei with the weaker weapon. She has to convince a country of happy, contented people that Carson isn't a hero at all - that he is, in fact, turning their children into weapons, filling their heads with lies of a greater tomorrow, and then robbing that tomorrow from the countries surrounding them. 

And she has to do it at her own trial.

Armed with a few young adults that are hardly more than children, a file of information, and a couple dozen dragons, she has as long as it takes a jury to find her guilty of treason to prove that Carson is the opposite of everything he's claimed to stand for. And that's if she can keep herself and the children from being murdered beforehand. 

Welcome to the game of strategy. 


Azalei's Fall:

A happy ending for all but one.

It's the last stage of Azalei's extensive, daring, world-inclusive plan. One more move and it'll all be over, for good. But with all of the Souther Country's people trapped in an inhospitable wilderness, some of her most prominent allies among them, the last piece of strategy isn't enacted before Carson uses his influence to turn her closest companion to his side.

Losing allies and watching as the world teeters on the edge of giving into Carson's threads, Azalei must return home and confront her people. Yet, even though tensions are rising world-wide, at home she is welcomed as their country's rightful queen. Her people ready to rise to her call, the world waiting for the moment she takes the throne and resolves this war before it begins, the Families prepared to back her in whatever way she asks, she makes a final move that no one could have seen coming. 

In twist after twist that rattles everything Azalei's allies thoughts they knew about her, Arae's true intentions finally come to light, and they're nothing anyone could have imagined. With Carson exposing a new side to his own plan that pushes the world into the brink, and their faith in Azalei disintegrating before their eyes, Azalei's friends start to question everything they thought they knew about the game they've been playing these last few months. 

In the aftermath, the only questions that will remain are these: Who is friend, who is foe, and who will burn?



Author Info:

Bio: 

Miranda Marie is 24 years old and lives in the Black Hills of South Dakota. She began writing when she was about 10 years old. Because she was dyslexic, reading was very difficult for her. Finding writing easier, she lost herself in worlds of her own making. 

She participates in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) every fall, where she wrote and reworked all her books. She enjoys the community there, where she met many of her friends.

She's fascinated by turtles, as she believes they are essentially mini dragons with built-in armor.

 

Socials:

Her website: Sincerely, Miranda Marie


Other:

Here's my fandom Pinterest board for The Fire Rain Chronicles: TFRC fan board

Keep an eye on that board (and my Pinterest account in general) for review posts and related content. 


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Alright, there you have it! That's how you can enter the giveaway, that's what the books are about, and what's who the author is. Now what are you waiting for? Join the giveaway! ;D 

Last thing before I go...


July 1st surprise: 

Given the nature of this post, I figured I should just go ahead and tell you what the July 1st thing is. It isssss...

ANOTHER GIVEAWAY!

Yep! This giveaway will be for Dragons' Bane by Melody Jackson. 

The reason why I promoted that giveaway and not this one is because I actually didn't plan on doing this giveaway this year. But then I found out this was the five year anniversary for The Fire Rain Chronicles, and threw it together sort of last minute. 

So. If you're more of a fantasy person, come back on July 1st for that giveaway! ;D 


Aaaand that's all folks. Are you going to enter either of these giveaways? Have you read these books before? Do you put milk in your tea (I couldn't think of any other related questions okay)?

I'd love to hear from you below. 


- Edna Pellen



*The books, Amazon, and Google will say that Azalei's Riders (the first book in the series) was released on May 11th of 2018. This, however, is not true. If you go far enough back on Miranda Marie's FaceBook page you'll see it was published back in 2016, and if you look on GoodRead's date for when it was published, you'll it was April 24th of 2016.

The reason that those places say otherwise is because Marie re-published the books on that date. The original date, however, is April 24th, 2016, making this the five-year anniversary of The Fire Rain Chronicles.

Monday, April 5, 2021

Book Discussion: Shadow Road by A.E. Pennymaker




Hello hello reader and writer friends, 


Today I'm beginning a new series, simply called "book discussion", in which I can discuss individual books. If that wasn't obvious enough already. 

This is different from reviews in the sense that I go into more detail about my thoughts and whatnot than I do on my Goodreads/StoryGraph/etc. reviews. My reviews are meant for helping someone decide if they want to read something or not, my discussions are for just talking about the book in general. Then at the end, after my sign-off, there will be information regarding the author.

So without further ado, let's talk about this book. 


(Okay with a little bit further ado, here's a description (by me, it's not the official one) of what the story is about so you're not totally lost as to what I'm talking about: 

Shadow Road by A.E. Pennymaker is a steampunk adventure novel following a young woman, Bren, as she accidentally embarks on an adventure thanks to her senile father. Disaster finds them, and her father is presumed dead while Bren finds herself in unfavorable circumstances with two seafaring gents (well not quite gents, we'll get to that in a bit) who both need something from each other, from her, and from her now-gone father.)


The Action 

The action in this story was so good. All too often I read a story where the action just work out. It isn't bad and not necessarily poorly written, it just doesn't really work. It doesn't carry the intensity, imagery, or conviction that good action scenes have, and they often drone on or fizzle out fast. 

A.E. Pennymaker's do. Maybe I've just never read a battle between ships before (come to think of it, I actually don't think I have), but the battle sequences in this story were very good and gripping with real consequences, and I stayed up many a late night to see them through to their end. 



The POV Choice

The author decided to deliver this story from the written perspective of the main character, Bren. That is to say, she "wrote it", and we're reading her writing the events in her journal. This is an okay thing, I don't take any serious issue with it, but I didn't realize this is what she was doing for quite some time in reading it, until Bren directly referred to writing the previous events down. 

That's not a huge deal, I probably just missed something that would have clued me in earlier on, but it did make less interested in reading because of the endnotes. 
I've not read a lot of stories that use endnotes from this century, much less from a fantasy, but I'm not a big fan of them. I much prefer world building to be implemented throughout the story, shown and not told, instead of being given it via endnotes or a glossary. I digest and understand it much more in practice than in instruction, so to speak. 

In this particular case, the endnotes weren't really "mandatory reading"; you could just skip past them and still get the gist of what the situation or item in mention was, so it wasn't a huge deal, just wasn't something that I was enjoying. 

But once I realized that this story was being told through Bren's journal entries, I understood the author's decision better. It made the story feel more real,  because in real life we don't think "I reached into the plastic bag and drew out a bagel - a rounded piece of bread split horizontally and with a hole in the center - for breakfast," we'd be much more likely to think (if one was narrating their own actions) "I reached into the plastic bag and got a bagel". 

The same goes for fictional characters in other worlds. Bren knows what a... *flips through the book* ... "Starkaelle", is. So it makes sense that she wouldn't explain that to herself (although, on the rare occasion that I journal, I usually to over explain things just in case someone from the distant future reads it and has no idea what I'm talking about) and I can thus see why Pennymaker chose to go about telling the story in this way. 

However

The footnotes and endnotes were incomplete. There were times where she said some thing and then there was no explanation, so I just went on pretending I knew (which, if I'm honest, I did for quite a few of the noted subjects). 

So that is whatever it is. Not really an issue, but also not my favorite thing. 



Writing Style

The writing style was fairly good. It was never in-your-face with prose, but when it did venture out be more profound, it succeeded. I didn't cringe at it, which was very nice, because cringey prose are a great way to pull me out of the story, and I also can't remember finding any typos or bad grammar. 

There were some repeat phrases, though, that began to lose their touch after the first few times. And these were in regards to Captain Arramy. 

"He nodded. Once." 

"A muscle in his jaw ticked."

These two phrases are used constantly in regards to the captain. As far as I can remember they are the only repeat phrases, but they were used quite a lot. 


Another thing I noticed about the writing style is that it's portrayed almost like a historical fiction and less as a steampunk fantasy. The most fantasy-esque part is that it takes place in a different world, and the most steampunk part is the electricity and a couple of other things. The story being written in the form of journal entries, the world building, the settings, the character types, the plot, the lack of info dumps, these are all things I associate with historical fiction.

This isn't a problem at all, in fact I found it really interesting and think  it'd be a good book for historical fiction fans that are wanting to try out a new genre. But for someone looking for a loudly steampunk story, this might not be the best option. 

  


Pacing

Pennymaker's pacing was pretty good throughout the story. The beginning was a bit slow, but the chapters were short and by chapter seven I was invested. 
When disaster and dark moments struck, the author did a good job at not leaving the reader in a puddle of depression. She made it realistically emotional and gloomy, but then carried on in a way that didn't negate the weight of the circumstance and also didn't crush the reader with it. 
That's something that I absolutely can't stand in reading: the nonstop gloom-and-doom. 



The Characters

This one's going to have some sub...subjects. Sub-subjects. Yeah that makes sense. 
Anyways, it's going to have sub-subjects, there's three main characters and a bunch of side characters and I have thoughts on all of them. 


Bren

Bren was okay. I wasn't a fan of hers early on, and that was in large because of the prologue. The whole "I-love-him-but-he-doesn't-love-me-back" thing has never been something I've enjoyed reading, and that is the exact impression I got from the prologue. 
But I stuck with it and by chapter nine, she was okay (for the earlier chapters, her reactions to her father's state and neglecting what he said frustrated me greatly, though I did know why the author was showing and what she was portraying). Her reactions to various events and her thought process seemed realistic, though at times it could be frustrating, and she had humorous and relatable thoughts and actions. Generally speaking she was likable, but there's a certain something that happened that was really not likable which is mild spoilers and we will discuss it after talking about the next two gents.


NaVarre

NaVarre hit some dashing-pirate-whose-an-okay-guy cliches, but I really liked him, that aside (or perhaps that's just a likable cliche). Think Hook from Once Upon A Time, but he has both hands and is not in an annoying romance predicament. Had he had the aforementioned romance predicament, he might've been the exact same character minus one hook. 

His dialogue with the other characters was interesting and of course [spoiler spoiler spoiler] which does set him apart from Hook in OUAT (he was also a bit less dramatic), so he's pretty good all things considered and I quite liked him. 


Arramy

This guy. 
I don't even know what to say about this guy. 

When he was first introduced, I really really liked him. I was like "yesssss strong older stern-but-caring honor-bound yet careful-rule-breaking military characterrr". Because yes. And when Bren kept commenting about him in a more negative way, saying things that generally painted him out to be a big oaf, I was very confused because I was getting a stern-serous-kinda-gruff-but-still-gentlemanly-do-the-right-thing-er kind of man, not a big impolite oaf. 
Every time she would mentally say one of those things, I was greatly confused. 

But then, he did start being that, in so many words, and it was weird because he really hadn't seemed that way at all, but once she started thinking it he did. It was indeed very strange. Stranger still was when she began to think "why do I want him to like me" thoughts. Which I put down to "well, he is an authority figure that is respectable, anyone would want him to respect them back, plus Bren is young and impressionable" and whatnot. 

But, I still liked the lad. He was still a respectable captain who was looking after those under his care, which is always an appealing character type.


And then this thing happened. 

((Mild spoilers ahead, skip ahead to the next bold lettering if you wish to not have this mildly spoiled.))


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This whole time, I was dreading the potential of a love triangle between the three leads, but figured it probably wouldn't happen because A. the prologue already mentioned a lad that Bren fancied after all of this and B. Arramy is noted to be older than Bren, + NaVarre implies Bren's youth in contrast to both of them, saying she's likely "just out of finishing school" or something of the sort to depict how naive and young she would be in the context of secret conversation and whatnot. 

Keep that in mind a moment.

They're trying to create a diversion. Bren notices an older couple eyeing her and Arramy, thinking about how odd the circumstance must look as she was too old to be his daughter and too young to be his wife. The diversion consists of Arramy spontaneously kissing Bren full on the mouth and "deepening it" when she didn't pull back, to play the part of the overbearing male companion. Bren slapped him, and the situation passed, Bren getting on him for it and him saying "oh don't worry it'll never happen again *glaring at her as if he was the one who was spontaneously kissed on the mouth in public by someone too old to be kissing him*"
Honestly the circumstance made me laugh at parts. The improvised argument they had was pretty great and her embarrassment was funny, so I did enjoy it. Still, this began my dread of the love triangle once more.

NaVarre never made any romantic fuss, though, thankfully. I'm still confused because the prologue described a lad who matched his description, so I figured those two were the sailing ship, but there's a whole sequel I've yet to read so perhaps that just isn't resolved yet. 
So no triangle so far. However Arramy kept saying and doing things that seem to suggest he is legitimately interested in Bren, and Bren keeps thinking about Arramy. Which I put down to hyper-fixated embarrassment over the kiss (which would be understandable), plus the fact that it was her first kiss (by the by I really liked that detail; though it was just a passing mention, her being upset even briefly about losing her first kiss like that made me empathize with Bren in a way I didn't expect to),  and I'm hoping that it will remain that way. 

Because honestly, while I do see that this story has room for a romance, I would enjoy it more if it were just these three characters, none quite trusting the other but all needing something from them anyways so they're working together, eyeing each other out of the corner of their eyes the whole time while trying to solve this mystery. 
Though at the same time, Pennymaker has opened that door and I don't see how she could get out of it if she wanted to. So if she does continue on with this odd circumstance of romance(? I'm still not positive that's what it is), I hope that it doesn't result in a love triangle. Because while I can still like NaVarre despite his cliches, the love triangle between a dashing pirate, the female protagonist, and a handsome officer is a bit far for me.

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((End of spoilers))


The side characters

As I've now said, I liked each of the three main characters fairly well. They weren't perfect, but characters aren't supposed to be, so that's okay. They had a lot of great spots, too. But the characters that A.E. Pennymaker did a very good job on are the side and background characters (mainly Raggan; he was absolutely wonderful; 10/10 favorite character, barely Laffa (she had me genuinely laughing out loud) and the doctor (who is amazing)).
They all felt very real and realistic and they made the incredibly long amount of time spent at sea interesting, whereas it otherwise could've been horribly boring seeing as there's only so much that can happen. 



Conclusion

This was a quick read with great action, humor, and pretty good characters and storyline. It's not a book I full on loved, but I did really enjoy it and I definetly plan on picking up the next book (I just placed an order for it today, along with "Held Captive" by Grace A. Johnson), hopefully in time for the novella coming out in May and the third novel coming in June. 

I recommend it for pretty to people into lower fantasy and lower sci-fi, as well as low steampunk if that's even a genre, but I (as a primarily high-fantasy reader) really enjoyed it so whose to say you won't as well? Give it a go if you're interested, and if you've already read it I'd love to hear your thoughts (just be sure to give spoiler warnings when needed). 

This novel will be added to my Independent Book Recommendation page and I hope the other books in the series will follow it shortly. My actual review of this book can be found on both StoryGraph and Goodreads at some point: I'm posting this before those, so who knows when they'll be up. 


Until next time,


- Edna Pellen 


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A.E. Pennymaker's website: www.aepennymaker.com

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Tuesday, March 30, 2021

Help Wanted








Greetings!


I am doing something that I am very excited about (and have had to wait for a long time to talk about); I am adding a page to this blog devoted to independent authors (
you can go see it now!).

It's rather simple; an indie author can comment on that page with their story title and author name (links to where the story can be purchased and their website (if they have one) need to be included, as well as a content rating), I add it to my indie TBR, I buy it, read it, write a review, and if I like it I'll include it on the list of indie books I recommend (on the Indie Recommendations page).

The point of this is to support these writers and to give anyone from anywhere a chance to get their story told.

Are you an aspiring author? Save this for later! 
Come back here whenever you're published and post it on the Indie Recommendations page! I'm rooting for you! 

Are you an indie author? Go comment your published work on my Independent Authors page! 
Make sure you follow the guidelines I listed on that page, too. 

Are you a blog reader/indie author reader? Excellent, this is where you come in:
Please help me make this post spread around by sharing it to your published friends, favorite bloggers, and favorite indie authors! And maybe go the extra mile and post it on writing and reading forums, and social media. Tell them that Edna Pellen wants to support them, and link back to this post and/or the Indie Author's page.

My goal here is to reach as many indie authors and as many potential indie authors as possible (teenage authors in particular), from better known ones like Hope Ann and the Phoenix Fiction Writers, to the ones in a dark corner of the internet that nobody knows (who I cannot name because no one knows them).


So if you find the time, please share this post and/or the page. If you don't know any authors, post it publicly. If you don't have a means to do that, send the link on a piece of parchment by carrier pigeon to every one you know.


Thank you for taking the time to read this, I hope you have a wonderful day,


Best wishes,

 
               ~ Edna Pellen


P.S. I have no specific time frame for buying and reading the books, given that I have to have money in order to buy them, and time in order to read them. I also may not read all of them in some cases, particularly if they don't follow my guidelines. But don't let that discourage you from posting your book details on the Indie Recs page! If you follow my guidelines, I'll do what I can to read your book in a timely manner.

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