Wednesday, September 16, 2020

A Brief Update on The Path to Publication:

 


Hello, readers and writers alike! 


I know I dropped my consistency in posting again, but I have reasons. It likely won't pick back up in consistency for some time (though I'm going to try in October, as I will be participating in R.M. Archer's Preptober Prompts series).

But in the mean time, I have news that proves I have been productive in my absence: 

The good news: Roslyn has reached 100,000 words! 

The bad news: It is quickly surpassing 100k and shows no signs of stopping. 


I am seriously at a loss for how this happened. My brother and friends just asked "how" when I told them, and I don't know. The story is nowhere near done. In fact, I lost my ending. I knew where it was heading, but now I'm completely lost and just following my outline as best as I can, knowing it's leading to a dead end. 

My writing crew has said I'll probably cut back on words a lot during revising and redrafting, and I do agree; that's just part of the writing process. 
But, I also know that my writing style, as I've mentioned before, isn't a rushed one. I find stories where travel scenes are skipped, where "meaningless" scenes don't happen, and where the story goes too quickly to be uncomfortable for me, both while reading in writing. Not bad, just uncomfortable. Needless to say, my actual plot seems to be spread out pretty far due to these scenes.
So if I find that my word count doubles to 200k (as I suspect it will) due to these such scenes and prose, it's just going to need to stay that big, because I won't be changing my writing style or splitting this into multiple books for the sake of the reader's sanity. If a reader doesn't want a brick-sized-book, they don't need to pick it up (though I do pity my alpha-reader for this). 
(Perhaps this is how Tolkien felt when he tried to publish The Lord of the Rings as one book but was forced to do it as three separate books instead.)

So really, at current my only issues with this book continuing on at such a on-going length is that I need this to be done before November at the latest. Ideally, it will be done by October 1st so that I can read it over and write the second draft during NaNoWriMo, but I'm really unsure if that's even possible at this point without rushing it. 

We shall see. If it does prove to continue on into November... well, I don't know what I'll do. I may make finishing the story as a whole my goal for NaNo instead of reaching 50k. But for now, the plan proceeds as mentioned in my opening post for this goal, and I intend on finishing Roslyn before October.

Excuse me while drop off the face of the earth to panic-write. 


With thanks for reading, 

                

                                - Edna Pellen


P.S. While we're on the subject, and while October, the season of preparation for NaNo, is at hand, what's the biggest project you've ever written? 
Or, if you're a reader, what's the biggest book (or book series) you've completed?


Friday, September 11, 2020

A Poem of Mourning

 

A Normal Day

by

Edna Pellena

*In dedication to all those who were lost during 9/11, and to all the families who have lost them.*


A normal day 

He's on his way

To work once more to pay

The bills that are stacked up, their payment so late


By the lobby 

Dropping off his baby

Saying hello to the front desk lady

Ready to start work with a smile on his face


Just the norm

Not expecting the oncoming lorn

Caused by the chaos as it's born

Not expecting he'd be mourned

Not knowing what was in store

Not knowing he was the farthest from safe


Sunday, August 23, 2020

50 Ways to Aggravate Your Characters


                             
 
 



Hello hello! 

Today I have prepared for you a list of 50 (realistic) ways to aggravated your characters without serious consequences.
Your characters are probably experiencing a some of these things already, and you may not have thought to write it because they're so minor, but these things are great ways to get at your characters and keep them agitated and experiencing burdens without serious injury or plot tools becoming involved. 

(One thing to remember about this: Stay consistent. Don't give your character symptoms of dehydration one day and forget about it the next, as that would be an on-going thing. That applies to many things on the below list.)



1. Body Aches and cramps

2. Dehydration

3. Hunger

4. Getting dirty (great for characters on a lengthy adventure with no way of cleaning themselves)

5. Minor injuries (splinter, sprained wrist, torn nail, paper cut, etc)

6. 
Burning their tongue on a hot drink/food

7. Losing something

8. Dropping something

9. Loneliness

10. Insomnia


11. Campfire ash and smoke flying at them

12. Stepping on something sharp

13. Being annoyingly cold or hot

14. Petty arguments and misunderstandings 

15. Waking up early/staying up late

16. Staining their favorite clothing article

17. Tearing an article of clothing

18. Bugs buzzing around them


19. Craving things available to them

20. Swords/daggers/holsters getting in the way when they try to sit and getting caught on stuff

21. Hiccups

22. Needing to relieve themselves but being unable to for whatever reason

23. Being interrupted with needless stuff (stumbling, another character, a dog barking, whatever)

24. Language barriers

25. Allergies

26. Pebble in their shoe

27. The lack of a incredibly simple skill

28. Have a limb 'fall asleep'

29. Pet peeves

30. Trigger weird and senseless fears

31. Losing all motivation

32. Boredom

33. Being unable to articulate themselves

34. Caffeine withdrawal

35. Knives/swords going dull and constantly needing to resharpen them

36. Seemingly senseless headaches

37. Ears needing to pop

38. Biting their tongue on accident

39. Slipping on random things

40. Being teased by other characters

41. Shoe laces constantly coming undone

42. Trying to break a habit but messing up their efforts after a while

43. Having a tickle in their throat that won't go away  

44. Catching a cold

45. Bug bites

46. Getting a song stuck in their head

47. Bumping into things

48. Having a word or thought on the tip of their tongue

49. Being one cent short of the amount of money they need for something

50. Having to sneeze but being unable to




There you have it! I hope this list serves you well, and I pity your characters should you use any of these things. Remember to use them with consideration, as constant annoyances can agitated your readers in a less than desirable way.
Best of luck with your writing! 




                   ~ 𝓔𝓭𝓷𝓪 𝓟𝓮𝓵𝓵𝓮𝓷 



P.S. If you find a way to use any of these, I'd love to hear about it below. Messing with characters can be great fun.



        


Thursday, August 20, 2020

   
                     
"Singing Ice' is meant to be about a man who is dying from the cold, laying on a frozen lake. He is too exhausted, worn, and weak to get off the lake. He can't move any of his body, so he listens with his ear to the ice to hear it sing, but instead of comforting him as it once might have, it's reminding him that death is coming closer, until he can feel the ice cracking. But it isn't just cracking, it's breaking, so he knows his death (whether it is of cold or the ice breaking) is imminent.

This poem was inspired by a prompt in a writing group of mine, so many thanks to them for suggesting the prompt. I really enjoyed writing this, and I hope you enjoy reading it." - Edna Pellen

Thursday, August 13, 2020

The Sound of Silence and How It Applies to Today

 



Greetings, friends! 


I generally try to avoid posting about the world around me. I like to keep this platform as one for escaping the world into creativity and hopefully uplifting those who read my words simply by having a good attitude and good words, especially now.
But today, I wanted to talk about something directly to do with this world. 

The Sound of Silence by Simon and Garfunkel has been a song that I loved since I first heard it, and I could never quite explain why, except for the fact that it is what I believe to be a prime example of an artist portraying what is in their head perfectly.
But now, in this hectic year, I've found the song proving itself even more relevant, as well as sad.  

So here I am to pull apart this song, and show you the meaning that I've found in it, verse by verse. 


Verse One

Hello darkness, my old friend
I've come to talk with you again
Because a vision softly creeping
Left its seeds while I was sleeping
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence


This first verse gives the setting.
Humanity seems to be attracted to darkness, or maybe darkness is attracted to humanity (maybe even both). And this year so far has been very dark. 

And that vision is the vision of what we couldn't see, and of what we can see. While these months of solitude were dragging by, months of loneliness, months of fear, months of listening to the government and to the CDC without consideration, while we were sleeping, others began to speak. 
Those people are the doctors and scientists and even every day citizens who are speaking truth, but who are hidden away, being silenced. 

And so, the "sounds of silence" is the absence of truth.


Verse Two

In restless dreams I walked alone
Narrow streets of cobblestone
'Neath the halo of a street lamp
I turned my collar to the cold and damp
When my eyes were stabbed by the flash of a neon light
That split the night
And touched the sound of silence


We were all alone in the quarantine, trying to find our own way through it amidst debates, hate, contradictions, logic, a lack of resources, confusion, frustration, fear, and so on. 
And when we 'turn our collars' to this, when we're done and ready to just give in, there's that flash of light, that quick reveal, the glimmer of hope, that leak that let the truth slip out. 
And that light broke the sound of silence, that light of hope and truth, but not enough for everyone to see. Just enough for those who were looking. But then, it was taken down again, removed because it "violated" some community standard, or because it offended someone.
So no, it didn't break the sound of silence, it just brushed its surface, it just touched it. 


Verse Three

And in the naked light I saw
Ten thousand people, maybe more
People talking without speaking
People hearing without listening
People writing songs that voices never shared
And no one dared
Disturb the sound of silence


That flash of light opened some eyes, and to those who listened to the truth and hope that just barely got out enough to assure them and to quiet fears, they began to see things as they were. 
They saw people, thousands of people, who talked without speaking, conveying their thoughts in a double-sided post, in a passive aggressive statement, not speaking outright directly. 
And they heard each other without listening, they let their words come out, maybe even uninterrupted, but they didn't listen to what they had to say, they just let it play until it was their turn. 

People writing songs, people writing posts, people saying truth, people challenging the norm, but their songs were never shared. No one would repeat them, no one would echo them, no one would spread them, because they didn't dear disturb the sound of silence. They didn't dare disturb the absence of truth. 
Because really, truth is a scary thing.


Verse Four

"Fools," said I, "you do not know,
Silence like a cancer grows
Hear my words that I might teach you 
Take my arms that I might reach you"
But my words like silent raindrops fell
And echoed in the wells of silence

Within the sound of silence


Those who listened, those who saw that hope and truth before it was gone, grew angry. They called those who wouldn't listen 'fools' and 'sheeple', their frustration escaping as they reminded the others of how the absence of truth grows tyranny, control, compliance, lies, and fear. 
Then they shift into nearly pleading with them, begging that they would hear, no listen, to their words that they may explain their stance, that they may give their evidence, and assure them of the truth that is so hopeful, that they would work together to continue to uncover truth. 
But their words fell on deaf ears, just more words in the well of hidden truth. 

Just more words hidden in the sound of silence.


Verse Five


And the people bowed and prayed
To the neon god they made 
And the sign flashed out its warning 
In the words that it was forming 
And the sign said "the words of the prophets
Are written on the subways walls
And tenement halls
And whispered in the sounds of silence.


People have begun praising select faces, claiming only their words are the truth and the only truth despite given evidence. They've made them and their stances into an idol, nearly.
And warnings are all around, so many red flags have been raised regarding those select individuals as well as others and the arguments they raised, so much has been proven wrong. 
And the words of truth and of what is to come and of what is here now, they're all said not by great individuals, but by the people who are being kept silent, the nobodies. 
But their words are no more than a whisper now, for if they were any louder, they may very well be silenced permanently.
So their words are whispered in the sound of silence. 

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I'm not sure of what I hope you take away from my posts this time around. I suppose just these two things: 1.) The Sound of Silence is a brilliant song, and 2.) Listen, don't just hear.
I do hope you enjoyed this post and my take on this wonderful song. 


Until we meet again, I remain,


                             ~ 𝓔𝓭𝓷𝓪 𝓟𝓮𝓵𝓵𝓮𝓷 


P.S. Check out the song The Sound of Silence and tell me what your take on it is, I'd love to hear it.




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